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 Election Open in new Window. [E]
My take on 2024
by Purple Catching Up Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Tulipp* Greetings, Purple Catching Up! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2024" Open in new Window. and you have posted previous to me. *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Tulipo* My Thoughts

I cannot WAIT for this election to be over with. *Facepalm* I am so sick of the campaign ads. I just have to shake my head at what I hear at times!

Your poem says a lot in only 16 lines/72 words!

My favorite lines are:
Morals they truly lack.
For it is all a game,
They should hide in shame.



*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         Politicians greedy fights, *Right* Politicians' greedy fights,
         Striping away more rights. *Right* Stripping away more rights.


*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         I've already sent my ballot in. I'm DONE. *Laugh* Best of luck in the contest! Nice work.

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Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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Angel with Pumpkin


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