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 WHY I LIVE? Open in new Window. [E]
Why I live, for whom I live, why should I live at all?
by Dr M C Gupta Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings,

I found this using the Random Read and Review button.

I do hope this isn't autobiographical. I feel profoundly for the narrator's sense of uselessness and that he's outlived his purpose. You've captured a relatable sentiment with your words. Anyone at any age can feel like this. If it's you, always know you're a valuable member of this site and the world.

I love how you were able to put it into meter and rhyme to make it memorable. If I'd seen this when I was a kid, I would probably have memorized it and written it in my poetry collection.

I don't see anything I'd correct here. Good work *Smile*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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