Hello, RiverD0g aka samuelorona!
INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
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I enjoyed reading your rules for writing comedy and bookmarked it for future reference.
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Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.
MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:
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Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.
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I thought it was super cool that you were "a writer for a comedy show in Hollywood in the early 1990s when [you were] 20 years old." I'm 99.9% sure that I would never have such a job.
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Though I am going to try to write a novel with humorous elements next month for National Novel Writing Month. That's very different from writing for television and Hollywood. I then wondered what you're doing now and will aim to check out your bio after writing this review.
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I liked that you included basic hero / villain information as well as comedic information in your writing tutorial.
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I totally agreed with you about the lowest form of comedy. I grew up with someone who did that and thought he was hilarious but almost no one laughed and almost no one liked him.
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I totally didn't know rule three and would have assumed the opposite. I'll definitely be checking out your other writing tutorials.
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I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your comedic writing tutorial.
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I thought the comedy, opinion and biographical genres you selected were perfectly appropriate for this comedic writing tutorialof yours.
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CONCLUSION:
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I enjoyed reading your comedic writing tutorial, and would love to read more about your experiences as a comedy writer.
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Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, learning, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!
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Once again, happy anniversary day and month! I hope the year ahead is filled with many laughs, blessings and much joy for you!
May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler
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