Hello, Queen Norma Jean, Head Cheerleader of October Prep!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your LABS essay every time I read it, including today.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I read this LABS essay of yours sometime in the past and enjoyed it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for a future review and today's the day I finally got around to it. I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

I could totally relate to this LABS essay of yours. While my dogs didn't have run-ins with bears (wow!), they were very similar to your amazing Bonnie. Dogs are truly amazing creatures and your essay demonstrated that well.

I suspect that most dog lovers could relate to this LABS essay of yours and would share my excellent impression of Bonnie. She sounds like a stellar canine companion.

My favorite line was the last one. What a lovely end to your LABS essay and way to close the story element.

I thought you did a great job with the prompt words. I wondered if this was written for the Daily Flash Fiction contest or some other contest? If it said, I didn't see it. My apologies if I missed it.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your LABS essay.

I thought the personal and pets genres you selected were perfectly appropriate for this LABS essay of yours. If you wanted to add a third you could include something like "biographical" or "experience."


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!

As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your LABS essay, and thought Bonnie was an amazing dog friend. I'm so glad you had/ have her in your life.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!


May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










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