Hello, Parry, aka teece!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your "Everyday" poem and it brightened my day today.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

I could totally relate to this "Everyday" poem of yours. We are so much more than the lables we put on ourselves or that others put on us.

I suspect that most people who meditate or do personal development could relate to this poem of yours.

My favorite line was: the last, although I enjoyed the whole poem. I thought the last line was a nice way to wrap it up, with the higher level states of being.

I imagine you capitalized Consciousness and Joy to emphasize them.

I didn't notice any spelling mistakes in your "Everyday" poem.

I thought the spiritual genre you selected was appropriate for this poem of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
In the spirit of helpfulness, I have one little suggestion to make your piece stronger. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't, no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section.

Still reading? You're brave! Yay for you!

Really it is a tiny thing. We're allowed to list three genres here, and adding two more might get you more readers, as people sometimes search by genre for things to read here. There are plenty of options, but some that come to mind are inspirational and experience and personal.

As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.

CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your "Everyday" poem, and decided to fan you because of it. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary day and month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










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