This looks like the start of an interesting story. You have someone, who looks like they just saw a murder. They try to keep quiet, to avoid giving their position away. However, it seems that someone has found them, and they aren't the sort that wants to help them out. Makes one wonder what will happen next.

Characters
The characters seem interesting. I wonder what will happen next.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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