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 Tips for relaxing face muscles  Open in new Window. [13+]
A story on childhood memories and games which still are beneficial face relaxers.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Ah, the "Let's Make Funny Faces" Game - make a goofy grin, stick out your tongue, and more, all to see who can do something crazy. All in a bit of fun. Turns out, this is a great way to relax, laugh, as well as make ourselves look, and feel, younger, not to mention get rid of stress. Very interesting.

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An interesting piece, which made me laugh.

Spelling and Grammar
You have a number of "i"s that need to be "I"s instead. Likewise, there's a "kike" that needs to be "like" instead. Also, you need some space after commas and periods. Finally, space between paragraphs to make reading easier.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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