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 | Owls  [E] They're just statues, right?  |
| (5.0)   Greetings, New Year's Sox! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2024" and you posted this item previous to my entry.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked Woohoo! You are doing a great job in ""13" - CLOSED" ! It's a lot of work and commitment and I'm quite impressed with the stories you and others are pumping out. Using quotes as prompt is quite a challenge, but WOW! What an imagination you and the others have! I really liked this entry about the owls. The buyer had already talked the real estate agent down once, and I loved how she did it again once she learned the owl statues turned alive on full moons and would eat the residents if they were not fed raw meat, because of a curse! What a great story!  I loved the visual of the six-foot-high owl statues in front of the house! Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderI didn't notice any typos or other distractions. Awesome! Final ThoughtsI can't wait to discover what else you come up with! While I'm not judging the entries, I'm certainly amazed by what I've read so far. Write on!   A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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You last responded to this review 10/30/2024 @ 8:29pm EDT