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 Beneath the Armor Open in new Window. [13+]
War made her slowly break more and more.. who'll help her when she needs it the most?
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A soldier trying to prepare for some rest and relaxation is annoyed by the ticking of a clock, so they put an end to the ticking. However, things become even worse, as she soon realizes that the ticking was what kept her sanity in check. She soon hears some more noises, and she doesn't know if it's friend or foe outside her door.

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The characters look interesting.

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Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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