Hello, Veronika!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your "Wallow No More" poem every time I read it, including multiple times today.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Welcome to Writing.Com! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your joining us here and find the review uplifting and encouraging. It's a great community and I hope you feel welcome here.

I suspect that most people could totally relate to (or use for motivation) this "Wallow No More" poem of yours. It's much better to do what's in the second half of your poem than what's in the first half, for sure.

My favorite line was: "Stagger away from tarnished thoughts," as it felt unique and had a bit of alliteration and was uplifting.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "Wallow No More" poem.

I thought the experience, inspirational, and philosophy genres you selected were appropriate for this "Wallow No More" poem of yours.


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your "Wallow No More" poem, and hope to see you around Writing.Com in the future.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, welcome!! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










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