Hi Invents,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is sinister. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about restless spirits who are in agony as they are faced with self centered things they did in life. I am hoping that these spirits find peace. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.