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 Cool Dark Night Open in new Window. [13+]
Reach for me, through the dark
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Review of Cool Dark Night  Open in new Window.
Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.


*Reading* THE POEM

The poem spoke to a night in a lover's bed.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I like the concept of the heat of passionate that a cool dark night could evoke.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem. There is no set rythme scheme, though there are rythmes.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to change font and make easier to read on the website.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Sweet yet wild, a flying dove, taste of love, oh so real." This description implies a lot - a sweet love, that soars to new heights, tangible and real.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The title is a interesting choice for the poem and it conflicts with the heated tone the contents set. Nice juxtaposition.

Reviewed by StephB for the Angel Army

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