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A pleiades with 'æ' and 'ay' sounds. The day before May Day.
by Kåre เลียม Enga Author Icon
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Greetings, Kare!

I found this using the Random Read and Review button, after it gave me something from a person I had to decline for AI content... *Irritated*

Anyway, I like your style of writing poetry. This is compact and creates a clear picture in one's mind, of spring and the activity leading up to May Day.
The form is clever; I see you were writing with a given form, and you did well. I used to eschew following forms and structure, until I joined the Promptly Poetry challenge. The weekly prompts have given me the opportunity to try new things and stretch my mind without worrying about contests or anything.

This was an enjoyable read, providing a quick glimpse into a different culture.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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