Hi Akansha,

This is a wonderful article. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the article. The topic is pretty much universal, and the reader will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about the effects of bullying. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your read. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)In a few places you have neglected to double space between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.