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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" Greetings, Tina M. Courtney! I am reviewing this because I am part of the WdC Anniversary Account Review Team, and today happens to be your 13th WdC Anniversary! First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked I completely concur with your kind letter to Writing.com, wholeheartedly, Tina! What a great place for a writer to unleash his or her creative juices. I've been camping out here for twenty-two years, so yes—I certainly share your view of this wonderful site! The members here do their best, too, on encouraging others in their writing endeavors. Suggestions/Comments to Consider There are just a few nit-picky areas I thought you might want to be aware of. Of course, it's up to you if decide to change them or not. Paragraph 1: broden broaden Paragraph 2: Rather its crafting Whether its crafting there is so many there are so many Paragraph 3: You might want to just read through this entire paragraph, as it felt like there were words missing here and there. Paragraph 4: Thanks you Writing.Com. Thank you, Writing.Com. Last Line: Did you mean sincerely, instead of Sincere,? Final Thoughts This is a heartfelt letter that most of us here at Writing.com can connect to. Also, if you make the suggested corrections I've listed above, let me know and I will gladly change the rating. A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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