Hi Veronika,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone who seems calm and collected on the surface but is longing to have someone challenge their calm. I hope that the speaker finds something to break the tedium they find in their lives. I read to the last word to see if this happened. I loved this poem. The poem has a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.