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 | Ode to Love  [18+] This is a short story about a day dream I had.  |
| (4.0)   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"   Greetings, Wendy Ann Williams! I am reviewing this because I am part of WdC Account Anniversary Review Team and today you have been here 21 years! Wow!  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked What a fantastic dream! You've described it very well and included details which makes the reader feel she is right there. A few of my favorites are: --> kisses that wipe away my tears--> healing caresses--> I weep at the tenderness of his gaze--> we dry one another off with kisses Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderParagraph 1: I except.  I accept. Paragraph 2: with light lunch with a light lunch There are some areas that could use a comma for pause.  Final ThoughtsYour words are beautifully written! Nice job. Again, Happy 2st WdC Account Anniversary!  A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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