Hello, KnightScribe!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your "Star of the Night" poem every time I read it, including today.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I read this "Star of the Night" poem of yours sometime in the past and enjoyed it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "November" file. ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

Your poem was concise yet lovely and inspiring to read. It was the perfect addition to my holiday celebrations today.

I appreciated that you bolded each of the first letters of each line to make the acrostic words "silver bells" stand out more for your readers.

My favorite line was: "Love here shining forth." Jesus Christ is the epitome of love and Christmas the best gift for all of humanity. Your whole poem was lovely though.

I saw that one of your genres was "contest entry" and wondered what contest your poem had been entered in. I hope it won. The competition here can be of extremely high quality so sometimes even very lovely poems don't win.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "Star of the Night" poem .

I thought the religious and spiritual genres you selected were appropriate for this poem of yours. If you wanted to replace "contest entry" with a different genre, "holiday" might be a good choice.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!

As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your "Star of the Night" poem, and the feeling of holiness and Christmas spirit that it evoked in me. Thank you for writing and sharing it here.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the holiday season, your Christmas celebration and your year ahead are filled with blessings and joy for you and your loved ones!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










Positive Hearts
A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 




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