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 God  Open in new Window. [13+]
A letter to God
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Kanisha's Church,

This is a wonderful poem. The tone is full of anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is suffering and begging God for help. The reader is wondering what is going on in the speaker's life. They will read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a fabulous rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. I did come across a couple of structural issues that need your attention:


1)wite-Should read "write".

2)w/out-Should read "without".

You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. Great job.

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