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 | Pretty Kitty  [E] A clean limerick with a dark twist.  |
| (5.0)   HAPPY WDC 6th ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"   Greetings, Words Whirling 'Round! I am reviewing this because I am part of the WdC Anniversary Account Review Team, and today marks the sixth year of your membership here in this awesome community.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked What a fun little limerick for children! Of course, it is one of my favorite genres.  Your image fits perfectly, too. Did you find it after you wrote the image? Or did the image prompt you to write this piece to go along with it? I'm only curious, of course, because they both fit so perfectly together. This is very impressive in appearance, too, which is a plus in the children's genre. The large font is especially nice for kids and those with not-so-good eyesight when it comes to tiny text! Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderMy only suggestion would be to either use quotation marks around the dialogue, or use italics for the dialogue. At first, I thought you had changed your tense from past to present, but then realized that the tiger was talking. Final ThoughtsGreat job! I absolutely loved this.  A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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