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Scent of the rain/ word count: 151 Open in new Window. [E]
Rain and July move hand in hand.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Jaya!

I found this on the Random Read and Review button.

I love a good nature poem, and this one fits the bill perfectly. Your lines are unpretentious and free flowing, painting scenes of warm summer days with nourishing rain and the balance of life and growth. Five verses of four lines each adds stability and structure without the triteness of rhyme.

I feel as if this is describing a scene from either times long last or some semi tropical region of the world. It has geographical details which are at once both creative and accurate, showing us a slice of rural life pastoral and peaceful.

Nothing to suggest here; anything which appears “nonstandard” is fine when you’re doing poetry. I enjoyed reading this.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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