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My Sun That's You! Open in new Window. [E]
This is my creation for the daily prompt of The Writer's Cramp, which is due on 9-6-18.
by Jay O'Toole Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Dear Jay O'Toole Author Icon,

I found this poem of yours on the read and review page showing with a flair of that bard of yore with a touch of language hinting at modern day perplexities. There is a good rhyme and seemingly has consistent meter that is easy to consume for these eyes, including the first line that appears directly borrowed to set the tone.

My favorite passage:
Down here the summer days are hot.
The P.C. rules I quite forgot.
Now that the A.C. hit the spot,
let's talk about you, Miss Hot-to-Trot

It provides sensory detail from hot to cool, perhaps operating on another level, and depicts a struggle to be what another needs, willing to keep that subject on mantle. It’s been a while since considering ye olde English for poem. Somedays, as refreshing as that a/c.

A pleasure to considering your writing again. This, an older item. Until I peruse again,

Brian
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and Angel Army reviewer
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