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 Sam Adams Develops Synesthesia Open in new Window. [E]
Synesthesia
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings!

I found this using the Random Read and Review button because I accidentally clicked on it once today and needed one more review (total of three) to get the 250 GPs for the day’s work…

Well, this is a fun theme, derived from the Writer’s Cramp prompt. Are you aware of the movie about the Russian spy lady who had synesthesia? There’s enough potential here for several novels. It’s written in your unique matter of fact style, and I appreciate how you always choose a nice large clear font. Perhaps a more descriptive subtitle might be helpful, but since you have a stock character (a rather useful trick, actually) I guess it doesn’t matter much. You’ve spun out a quick and intriguing story idea here. It was a good read.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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