Hi _13poes,

This is a fantastic prose poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about grabbing onto and embracing the turbulence in your life instead of trying to make it stop. I value being busy and having a upbeat life. Having something to do keeps you healthy. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The poem is very lyrical even in prose form. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.