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 Chasing Horizons Open in new Window. [E]
A man listens to music, feeling nostalgia and excitement for adventures ahead.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

I see your portfolio is filled with "comfort writing," cozy stories and poetry meant to evoke good feelings and make us smile. I used to fuss and fret about whether I could find out if someone uses AI to craft works of words for them. But I've come to the realization it almost doesn't even matter, simply because there is no way to tell by pasting the work into the so-called "AI detectors." If I cared to waste my time, I could find a detector which would tell me your poem is 100% AI generated, and I could also just as easily find a detector telling me it's 0% AI generated.

I will instead focus on the thought behind this. You have obviously posted it for us because you think it's a work of beauty, something positive to brighten our day and encourage us on our journey. Your method used to craft it is almost beside the point.

As a lover of music, I resonate deeply with these words. I get so much out of the music I listen to, it's amazing. I find the courage to get up in the middle of the night, the strength to press through long cold winters, and even a sense of companionship during lonely walks. Music fuels my imagination, fills my head with images, gives me a safe, neutral subject to write about, and creates a sense of time and place in what would otherwise be a dull and tedious life.

This theme is perfectly captured here, as the figure we see draws motivation from the music he has loved for so long. It reaches a place in his heart which can be difficult to access any other way. I appreciate this poem because I don't remember seeing anything quite like it here before. As a child, I would have loved to memorize this and write it down by hand in a notebook where I gathered my favorite poetry. The sense of meter and rhyme is especially appealing.

I notice you don't choose genres for your items. This one would work great as "Inspirational," "Music," and "Experience" or "Philosophy." Genres are important because people may not be able to find your items otherwise as they search the site.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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