Hi Sarahblackwellstories,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is intense and full of love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if, and hoping that, Santa and Mrs. Claus will find time to just be a couple again. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, Santa Claus writes a letter to his wife promising her a romantic interlude just for them after a busy period in their life. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is well developed and believable. The story concentrates on Santa Claus, and he comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.