Hi dyxe0ri,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about a couple getting to know each other as the relationship progresses. I am hoping that this gradual learning about each other will lead this couple to a deeper connection. I read to the last word to see if this happened. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used grammar and punctuation consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.