Hi Ricardo,

This is a wonderful essay. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the essay is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You introduce the topic with a brief story about a time you offered advice to a friend of yours. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on you and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about the problems you have encountered in giving people in your life advice and how this has affected you. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.