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 I Wish I Could Fly Open in new Window. [E]
I wrote this for the Pond Poetry picture of a flower blooming through a cement crack.
by dragonline (dragon online) Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Well, this is an interesting poem. To me, it feels like the narrator is at a point where they are suffering from a bout of depression, as they feel that they have no friends, and that they just want to get away from everything. That can hit hard in many ways, depending on the person, especially if they want it to end.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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