Hello, Prodigal!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your "In All I Do" poem today. I thought it was a beautiful tribute poem to those who loved you when you were at a low point in your life.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

I could totally relate to this "In All I Do" poem of yours. I am also thankful for the people who loved me through my low points. This is a beautiful way to honor your truest friends and family members.

I suspect that most people with some solid relationships could relate to this poem of yours.

My favorite line was: "but you held me in your heart." It's a lovely line and is expressing, to me, the essential spirit of what matters most - love. I enjoyed the whole poem though.

I thought you did a great job with your rhyming and that your rhymes added a lovely touch to your poem.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "In All I Do" poem.

I thought the emotional, experience, and community genres you selected were appropriate for this "In All I Do" poem of yours.



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!

As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your "In All I Do" poem, and related well with your sentiments that you expressed in it.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary day and month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










Positive Hearts
A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 




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