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 |  | On This Night  [E] Shape poem for Christmas  |
| (5.0)   Greetings, Purple Catching Up ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2024" and also "The WDC Angel Army" .  And you just happened to post your I Write entry previous to mine so I'm here to send you this review! First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked Wow. This is so much better than mine!  It's fantastic, in fact. Everything is so well-balanced. And you managed to rhyme this shape poem, too! Very impressive. Mine is a mess. But hey, I tried! You obviously got it right. A shape poem is harder than it appears to be but you made it look so easy! Good job. I thought it was a nice touch, beginning the top of your tree with a red "I". Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderSomething to consider, but it's nothing you should worry about either way, is perhaps uncap the beginning of each line so it matches the branches on the right side of your tree. JUST a thought.   Final ThoughtsI love the simplicity of the appearance of this shape poem. I'd also like to give credit to the poem itself. You've created an entry you should be proud of. Nice work!  A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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