Hello Sarah ,

I am here with a review for your holiday themed article because I am taking part in "12 Days Of Christmas 2024" .

Very thought-provoking article. It is at timely, but also a reminder how "the more things change, the more they stay the same."

The article mentions how some people are more interested in the price of an object or whether they can somehow turn it into clicks, likes, follows, etc. on social media. While the digital part is new to this century, young people reshaping the holidays, Christmas in particular, is not new. Christmas has been overtaken by consumerism a long time ago.

Your text seems to be penned off the cuff as if you were writing what came to your mind. That's perfectly fine. You could clean it up a little bit for spelling issues.

An example:

Christmas is just around the corner and what better way to celebrate than being together with your dear once. ones

Keep writing.

Annette