I am here with a review for your holiday themed poem because I am taking part in "12 Days Of Christmas 2024" .
The intro line about the bathroom that sprang a leak before Christmas is hitting home. That exact thing just happened to me. The workers just finished the drywall yesterday and we still have to get the plumber out to put some of the pipes back together.
Yup. The poem confirms it. Water. Drywall. Fans. It's all there. It was all here. What a mess that it was the commode!
The ending of the poem, upbeat and with a positive outlook, made everything better. Of course, it might be a little tight with sharing a bathroom. But everything will work out in the end.
As mentioned, this one hit home. I hope that it won't ever happen again to you or to me.
Merry Christmas.
Annette
You responded to this review 01/08/2025 @ 11:06am EST
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