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That Night Before Christmas ... Open in new Window. [E]
Bathroom springs a leak just days before Christmas
by Marushka Author Icon
Review by Annette Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Marushka Author Icon,

I am here with a review for your holiday themed poem because I am taking part in "12 Days Of Christmas 2024Open in new Window..

The intro line about the bathroom that sprang a leak before Christmas is hitting home. That exact thing just happened to me. The workers just finished the drywall yesterday and we still have to get the plumber out to put some of the pipes back together.

Yup. The poem confirms it. Water. Drywall. Fans. It's all there. It was all here. What a mess that it was the commode!

The ending of the poem, upbeat and with a positive outlook, made everything better. Of course, it might be a little tight with sharing a bathroom. But everything will work out in the end.

As mentioned, this one hit home. I hope that it won't ever happen again to you or to me.

Merry Christmas.

Annette
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