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Given: Dec 23, 2024 at 7:19pm
Length: 620 Characters |
589 w/o WritingML
A tale of love and loss. When young, a man and woman, both full of love, became husband and wife. However, time passed, and the love strained, as the man's heart yearned for another. They eventually parted. For years they remained separated, until a phone call beings them back together.
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Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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