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 Old Days Open in new Window. [E]
"Old Days" is a tale of love, loss, and reunion over fifty years.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A tale of love and loss. When young, a man and woman, both full of love, became husband and wife. However, time passed, and the love strained, as the man's heart yearned for another. They eventually parted. For years they remained separated, until a phone call beings them back together.

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The characters seem interesting.

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You might want some space between paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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