Hi Thankful Sonali,

These are two fantastic poems.

In the first poem the tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about how the keyboard enhances soft or classical music. I love both types of music. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The acrostic poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure.

The second poem has a formal tone as well that suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the emotional impact of listening to music being played on a keyboard. Each type of music I have listened to has invoked a particular emotional response. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The acrostic poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure.

In both poems you have used the word "Keyboard" very creatively. Great job.