Hello, Sharkdaddy, aka elloy!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your "How I became Sharkdaddy" short story today.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

You conveyed a lot of interesting information with a minimum of words. Well done on being both interesting and concise.

I liked that you wrote a story that explains your handle here.

I wondered how many trampoline-trained, handy, chess-playing husbands and grandfathers are out there? You might just be the only one going by Sharkdaddy!

I wondered what contest you entered this "How I became Sharkdaddy" short story in? And did it win? I always want to enter so many contests, but time seems to be getting shorter and shorter and all the deadlines pass by. Well, we all do what we can.

I thought it was neat that you joined Writing.Com on a Christmas day. If you celebrate Christmas, or even if not, it's memorable. If you do - I hope you had a merry Christmas! If you don't, I hope you had a happy whatever you do celebrate!

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "How I became Sharkdaddy" short story.

I thought the personal, comedy, and contest entry genres you selected were appropriate for this "How I became Sharkdaddy" short story of yours.



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!

As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your biographical story, and enjoyed learning more about you.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, sense of humor, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










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