Wow! I will first say that I am not a poet by any stretch, and I admire those who do it well. To say you did this well would be a gross understatement! This is an incredible piece about feeling at home in the ocean, with it all around you. I have never been to the ocean, as I live in the Upper Midwest, but I feel many of the same feeling about the water around me. This is an incredible poem, as well as a look into your mind and your relationship with the ocean. Thank you for so candidly sharing this piece with the world. The world needs more of this!
Write on!
Beck