Hi Alex,

This is a fantastic article. The title makes a direct statement about traveling in car. It makes the reader start thinking about their own travelling experiences. They will begin to read right away to hear your thoughts on the matter. You introduce the topic with a brief description of Morocco and its attractions and by telling the reader exactly what they will be getting out of the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about why touring Morocco by rented car is the best way to go. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.