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Ireland Calls Open in new Window. [E]
Flash fiction 100w about following your heart.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

I see you look like a fairly polished author, adding an image and two genres and understanding the concept of a drabble (100 word story.)

As such, you've taken an experience and encapsulated it in brief, with a beginning, middle and end. Personally, I love drabbles, rising to the challenge of shaping a perfect story in the given limit while crafting it as vividly as possible. If this were mine, I would perhaps have twiddled with it more, trying to include a bit of scenery and some sort of strong emotional reaction to plant us in Diane's head. But these are techniques usually reserved for longer works.

I would recommend you add a third genre such as Supernatural; this will help people find your items when browsing. It will also allow as many opportunities to be nominated for a Quill Award as possible.

I also recommend you take some time to hang around here and get to know us a bit; the Newsfeed is a good place to start making friends. That's if you want to be sociable, of course; there are plenty of people here who don't hang out much. It all depends on how much you want WdC to be either a sort of social media site or a place to go for meaningful feedback on stories and poetry.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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