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 "Box" Open in new Window. [13+]
When meaning is a false promise and reality is monotone, how does one go on?
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A timer - just before it reaches 10:00, a button is pressed, resetting it to 0:00. This has happened countless times, as a traveler makes their way along the dunes, trying to climb them, in order to see past them - always pressing the timer. Why they do this, is unknown, even to them. Makes one wonder what happened to make them do this.

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The traveler seems interesting.

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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