Hello, S, aka stevengepp!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your "7 Factual Assumptions Debunked" blog post today.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

I could totally relate to this "7 Factual Assumptions Debunked" blog post of yours. Especially the food pyramid and 10% of our brains ones. You said it better than I have, so I might be directing people to this article in the future. That made me pause and check and yes, you have kindly posted this with no restrictions so anyone can read it.

I suspect that there's a market for this article. I hope you can find it and earn some money from it, because it's very well done and deserves a wider audience, in my opinion.

My favorite part was: "So, apparently, humans use only 10% of our brains. If we use it all, then we can get psychic powers! Only vegans can do this! Honestly!" This made me laugh out loud. Literally. And I choose to eat vegan. I don't think it gives me super powers though. I just don't like eating animals and I'm allergic to dairy and eggs.

I thought you did a great job with this whole post. It was well thought out and well written. It was also easy to follow and entertaining.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "7 Factual Assumptions Debunked" blog post.

I thought the personal, writing, and educational genres you selected were appropriate for this blog post (and overall blog) of yours.



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!

As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your "7 Factual Assumptions Debunked" blog post, and it made me think about what a great teacher you are. If this had a star rating option, I'd award it five stars.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, knowledge, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










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