Hi lixor,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. In the poem you talk about always striving for your dreams. I have so many dreams I am trying to achieve right now. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The Haiku poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. You concentrate on one image in this poem, one climbing a mountain to represent the effort you expel to get to your goals. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.