Hi Sunny,

This is a fantastic activity page. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the activity is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. The tone is light and friendly. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the page. You launch into the page without introduction or preamble. The reader is completely immersed in your monster. They will read to the last word. You have given a description of your monster and some images for the reader to enjoy. The page is eye catching and easy to navigate. Great job.