Hi Sam,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of joy and intensity. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Alex and Emily will have their romantic interlude uninterrupted. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a couple who decide to make love on New Years Eve. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.