As a (still relatively recent) pet owner, this piece hits hard. I was obviously aware of puppy mills, animal hoarding, and the sad reality of the shelter system. Only when my cat adopted me was I confronted with the harsh reality that companion animals endure. Sure, those who have loving homes are living charmed lives. The millions of others barely survive.
Your piece was very immersive since it was told from the dog's point of view.
You have one instance of a misplaced "a."
"It literally is a trickle down affect." This should be effect.
Heartbreaking but also beautiful story of a pet who gets its deserved loving home.
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