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 Dreamcatcher Open in new Window. [18+]
What happens when a dreamcatcher is full? 120 word flash
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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The intro line gave some of the story away, but you still achieved to make this story come to life with the details you gave it.

My favorite part is how you describe the jostling, snarling, and finally tearing of the web. Super vivid!

There weren't any spelling or grammar issues that would have jumped out at me, so I don't have anything to say in regards to that.

Annette
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