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 | Every Day  [18+] He shows his love.  |
| (4.5)  My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEMA poem about the love of a vampire.  WHAT I LIKEDI liked the story the poem told and could easily see this vinyette playing out in my mind.  STRUCTUREThis is free form poem. There is no set rythme scheme. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and is very visual. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "Folded like origami in the hiding place" This is a good visual using a good economy of words which heightens suspense. Well done. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe opening intrigues the reader and keeps them reading. I want to find out what happens. The title is appropriate to the poem. Nice expression.
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