Hi Dottie,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of pain and heart break. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a woman who has found out that she can't have children. I feel very sorry for this woman as I read. I read to the last word to see what became of her. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.