Hi Adherennium,

This is a fantastic essay. For anyone who does not know what "high street" means this title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the essay is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. I know what the term means but was still fascinated about why the decline was happening. I wanted to find out exactly what was going on. You introduce the topic by explaining exactly what a high street is. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about the decline of the high street in Britain and the reasons for this. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.