Hi Chariot to the Heavens,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how you run to the Lord to feel free. I am still trying to sort out my relationship with God. I am happy to see yours is a very good relationship with Him. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.